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Trevor W. 5-21-12 10:56

Positive : I thought that Joey's article was a good source of information and that it had all of the dangers of alcholol. I was to the point and very easy to read and understand.

Negative : The only thing that I found wrong with Joeys article was that there was one run-on sentence in the beginning. Joeys feedback I thought that trevor was right about the run-on sentences in the beginning but I dont think that I had all the information on alchohol but I did have alot Pete B 5-21-12 11:00

Positive: I thought that Joey's artical on alcohal was very good. I like that there was up to date information.

Negative: Needs to be more creattive and needs some fun stuff like pictures.

Joeys feedback I dont think that i need fun pictures because its supposed to be a seriouse subject i think he was right on the positive thing